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I'll never forget a swimming competition in which it participates. It all started when I took the airplane to Bogota. An hour later I was in Bogota, enjoying a very cold weather. The day after my arrival, began the competitions, I was very scared because I had never swum in that city.
Fortunately, everything happened as I expected, I did very well in the competitions, I won three medals, two gold and one silver.
When I finished my swimming competitions, I could enjoy the city, I met many wonderful places such as Adventure World. In this place I had a great time and the best of all was that I fell in bungee jumping. It was a wonderful experience, I felt like a bird, as if I could fly. I will never forget that day.
Also I went to La Candelaria, La Plaza de Bolivar, Campin stadium, and I bought many gift and souvenirs for my family and muy friends in malls like Unicentro, Salitre Plaza and other.
I forgot to mention that on this trip I met many pepole and now I'm sharing good times wuth them. Finally I returned to Cartagena, and I told my family everything I had experienced in my two weeks trip.
Fortunately, everything happened as I expected, I did very well in the competitions, I won three medals, two gold and one silver.
When I finished my swimming competitions, I could enjoy the city, I met many wonderful places such as Adventure World. In this place I had a great time and the best of all was that I fell in bungee jumping. It was a wonderful experience, I felt like a bird, as if I could fly. I will never forget that day.
Also I went to La Candelaria, La Plaza de Bolivar, Campin stadium, and I bought many gift and souvenirs for my family and muy friends in malls like Unicentro, Salitre Plaza and other.
I forgot to mention that on this trip I met many pepole and now I'm sharing good times wuth them. Finally I returned to Cartagena, and I told my family everything I had experienced in my two weeks trip.
Excellent work!
ReplyDelete...In which I participated..
...The competitions began...
I think you can use more phrases to tell stories.